You’ve written thousands of words — maybe even most of your book.

You can feel that the story wants to come together, but every time you look at your draft, it’s like staring at a jigsaw puzzle with half the pieces flipped upside down and most of the edges missing.

You’ve got notes, outlines, and half-formed ideas that no longer match what’s on the page. You know your world and your characters deeply, but you’re struggling to pull a cohesive story from the morass of information you’ve created.

The Black Friday Mini Blueprint Coaching Special is a one-off, developmental deep dive designed to help you see the story that exists within the drafts you have written and to help you figure out what comes next?

For $299/ £228 you’ll get:

A written diagnostic tool that maps out your story’s current shape: what’s strong, what’s confusing, and where the real potential lies.
A detailed developmental read of your first 3,000 words, with attention to story structure, POV, character arc, pacing, and world logic.
A 50-minute one-to-one call where we’ll unpack your feedback, talk through your story’s bigger picture, and create a clear next-step plan to move forward. This isn’t surface-level critique or nitpicking prose. It’s about understanding why the story feels stuck and what will get it unstuck.

Who do I work with?

Writers of fantasy, sci-fi, or historical fiction who have:

A partial or full rough draft and aren’t sure what it needs next
Lost momentum after worldbuilding or drafting
A sense their story could be more cohesive, but can’t yet see how
The commitment to do the work and the hunger to learn more about the craft behind what makes a story pull a reader in and keeps them reading

If that sounds like you, this session gives you both insight and direction without the overwhelm of a full developmental edit.

Who am I?

My name’s Esther. I’m a developmental coach who believes in honest, kind, and constructive feedback. I’ll tell you the truth about what’s tangling your story up and I’ll also help you see the shape of what it could become. Writers I work with often describe the experience as understanding the threads that tie their whole story together for the first time. The bigger picture finally starts coming into focus.

This isn’t about tearing your work down. It’s about finding a clear way forward to finishing the story you love and have spent months or years working on.

Step back from the muddle.
See your story clearly.
And start moving towards finishing the book you set out to write.

To get in touch, please use the contact form below to let me know your genre, where you’re currently at with your novel and that you’re interested in the BLACK FRIDAY OFFER. This is to ensure that your book and where you’re at with it is a good fit for this type of developmental work.

Offer valid until December 1st 2025 but spots can be booked until February 28th 2026.

You can learn more about me HERE